Cool fan flash.
I'm likin the style you put on the characters.
The only things preventing me from giving you a 10 are
- The pacing is pretty slow when it shouldnt be
Like the part where the girl is laughing or reed opening his eyes
- As a comic book geek some things are wrong here..
Jonzz and Shazamm are down but GL is still fighting?
I don't know about that one.. Shazzam is as powerful as Supes. Kinda indestructable.
-Pym has powers, how come he didn't do anything??
-The Hulk out of nowhere? I Wouldn't it make more sense to be the ever loving blue-eyed thing?
::Now for the good parts::
-Johnny Storm's voice and mannerisms were spot on. As if Marvel themselves created the dialogue. Great work!
-I like the animation's style. Very clean but take your time on some parts. GL didn't look the same in all his shots.
-The storyline seems prtty good. Don't drop the ball.
Thats enough from me, can't wait to see the next chapter.